Writing tips

After reading a few things (including my own) and speaking with one of my professors who has been doing RPG's for many years I think writing in second person would be much better.
The "I" never quite did it.

So I am reading again David Freeman's "Creating emotion in games" to get some good tips for creating the story, situations and characters.

I also found the following site with some neat tips on writing fiction:
http://www.pgtc.com/~slmiller/index.htm